tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5523054979073229550.post5068911262534545144..comments2009-04-27T03:29:06.327-07:00Comments on IN THE NAME OF GOD ALMIGHTY: IMPACT OF TECHNOLOGY ON SOCIETYfarashathhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15706007129686971335noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5523054979073229550.post-28504022601951256782009-03-04T21:15:00.000-08:002009-03-04T21:15:00.000-08:00Farashath,You have dealt with the task effeciently...Farashath,<BR/>You have dealt with the task effeciently. However a few tips for improving on your contribution.<BR/>1. Provide paragraph division.<BR/>2. deal with one main point in a paragraph. ie. segregate the impact of technology in different sector seperatly.<BR/>3. provide a proper conclusion.<BR/>4. Sequence words like, 'to begin with' ,'first and foremost' have to used appropriately.<BR/>revathiRevathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02762159156279362867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5523054979073229550.post-57240594971859463982009-02-27T05:24:00.000-08:002009-02-27T05:24:00.000-08:00ya its goodya its goodfarashathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15706007129686971335noreply@blogger.com